Rehearsed verse

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Sometimes I think this poetry,
Using 2 and 3 syllable words,
Seems so incredibly elementary
And even a little absurd

And maybe an insult
To the readers intellect
Too small in its message
So easy to direct

Attention to the end
Of the lines rhythm
Even a little predictable
In its scheme at times

And time again
New message same verse
Although, there are bits of nuggets
If heeded, and rehearsed


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14 thoughts on “Rehearsed verse

    1. Mona, this was a joy!!! You are so full of wisdom, you’re funny and smart and everything! I so enjoyed learning about you, your family and your life! Wow.
      I’m glad I met you. You are a joy indeed.😊


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