
Sometimes I think this poetry,
Using 2 and 3 syllable words,
Seems so incredibly elementary
And even a little absurd
And maybe an insult
To the readers intellect
Too small in its message
So easy to direct
Attention to the end
Of the lines rhythm
Even a little predictable
In its scheme at times
And time again
New message same verse
Although, there are bits of nuggets
If heeded, and rehearsed
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Good poem.
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Thank you. 😊
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Pleasure
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Hey Dorothy! I can’t wait to listen to your interview with Bottomlesscoffee tomorrow 🙂 it was me today.
https://bottomlesscoffee007.com/2019/02/02/the-voice-behind-the-keyboard-monaminga-from-france-epic-sode-49/
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Really?! I have listen. Thanks Mona!
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Mona, this was a joy!!! You are so full of wisdom, you’re funny and smart and everything! I so enjoyed learning about you, your family and your life! Wow.
I’m glad I met you. You are a joy indeed.😊
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Thank you Dorothy 🙂
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You’re welcome. 😊
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Dorothy…..can’t wait!!!
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Me either 😊
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I love this poem. ❤
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Thank you so much!
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I like it!
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Glad to hear “again” you heard it.
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