The reeling
of our real being
Is that we be
Cause in reality
We be, a peel

Outer shells
that dwell
to tell
The true components,
outlived moments
In this place
on the face
Of the earth
We’re birthed
To rehearse
The script
That He wrote for us
In His book
The seal broke with us
In mind
The kind
of life we should live
to give and fulfill
His purpose
Predestined plan
For man
kind of appeeling
Isn’t it?
This poem was inspired by the post
Peel of Human Being is Body as like Fruit’s Peel
https://tanusrirchokhe.com/2019/05/15/peel-of-human-being-is-body-as-like-fruits-peel
dorothy’spage © 2019 D. E. Young
VERY NICE POEM. Glad to know that you got inspired from my writing.
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It left a mark on my mind for sure. The perfect analogy.
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My absolute pleasure
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Flowin’!
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Thank you! 😉
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An innovative idea.
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I thought so too when I read the post.
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It is indeed
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Loved the appeeling pun!
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Thank you. I thought it was cute. ☺
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Deep meaning and a pleasure to read. The appeeling title grabbed my attention. Thank you Dorothy.
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Anytime. Thanks for stopping by.
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Your poetry is developing so much Dorothy. This is fantastic
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I appreciate your support Loraine
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You are very welcome Dorothy xx
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