Our human heart is
God’s in reverse
We’re the opposite
In giving, we’re the worst
We’re selfish in our nature
Thinking only of our own survival
First I think of me
Then you, if it isn’t while I‘m
Trying to get my needs met
If I have to neglect
you I will do it
As long as I‘m satisfied
I don’t care how you feel
How I rob your insides
Is the mindset
We gained from Adam’s mistake
Now our hearts tainted
Cause she listened to a snake
Give her advice
That was evil in its inception
Now we’re cleaning up
After Eve learned her lesson
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Very well done Dorothy. I before we, except after see!
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BC got rhyming skills! I hadn’t heard that one before. I like that.
Thank you
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Great
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Thank you
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I like your poetry and I generally don’t like poetry.🙂
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Thank you! That means a lot.😊
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I’m not the greatest fan of poetry either, but Dorothy’s is good.
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I didn’t know poetry wasn’t your favorite. I’m glad you like mine. I appreciate your reads.😊
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The main reason for my general lack of fondness is due to having had to analyse it for schoolwork. It was hell.
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Not a good memory for you then. I understand.
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Especially considering it’s RECENT… LOL
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Too close huh😄
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You’re amazing Dorothy.❤️
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Thanks Robbie. You’re so sweet.❤
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You’re very welcome as are you Dorothy.❤️
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😊❤
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Very true!
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Yep. That’s us.
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Love this!
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That’s good to know.
Thank you.😊
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So very well done Dorothy!!
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Thank you Bill! 😊
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A pleasure! 😊
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