This one I wrote as a contributing piece to a family newsletter I used to publish.
It was summer at the time and I thought it was kinda cute.
The Treat
Wouldn’t it be neat
To have a cool treat
Something tasty and sweet
To beat the summer heat
I’d like to have a bite
Of a flavor so nice
Maybe even twice
If it’s what I really like
Cool and fresh
Can sometimes be a mess
But there’s nothing less
I’d love to possess
In my mouth that’s ready
To take it steady
To taste what it’s getting’
On the
tip settin’
Ready
to be
eaten
What
I’ll be
treatin’
Nothing
can beat
it Once I
eat it
Don’t you think that’s a neat treat?
dorothy’s page © 2002 Dorothy E. Young
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Mouthwatering! 🤩
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Oh I LOVE the rhythm of this Dirothy. It engances what you are saying. A very upbeat poem
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Thank you! I’m glad you like it 😊
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I presume you’re talking about ice cream? Considering it’s spring here, I’d love some of that.
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Yes. A popsicle specifically. Didn’t you notice the shape of it words?
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Not really. I noticed the picture at the head of the article.
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Love it!! “family newsletter” great idea!!
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I did it for 4 yesrs.
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Wow!!Love that!!
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Thank you!
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